I will provide honest and constructive feedback on your lyrics for $35

In Songwriters 100% Guarantee By Mr. MBONA

I will provide honest and constructive feedback on your lyrics for $35

As a songwriter myself, I understand how personal and vulnerable lyrics can be. My goal is to offer clear, constructive feedback that helps you elevate your song while respecting your original voice and message.

✅ What’s Included:
1. In-depth feedback on 1 song (up to 40 lines)
2. Notes on tone, structure, flow, and emotional clarity
3. Suggestions for improving specific lines or sections
4. 1 revision round after delivery in case you’d like further clarification
5. I treat your lyrics with care — I won’t rewrite your work or insert my own style unless asked. This service is purely about polishing what you’ve already written.

💬 Process:
Once you send your lyrics (and optionally explain what you want help with), I’ll:
1. Read through carefully and highlight key strengths
2. Offer detailed comments and suggestions
3. Send back your lyrics with annotated notes + a summary explanation
4. You’ll receive everything in a clearly formatted doc or text file for easy review and editing.

If you're serious about improving your songwriting and want honest feedback from someone who values storytelling and artistry — let’s work.

  • Hip Hop
  • Trap
  • World
  • R&B
  • Pop
  • Soul

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