Songwriting feedback

EDM Hip Hop Pop Prog rock

Songwriting feedback

I'm in the process of making a pop album, similar to Justice by Justin Bieber, that explores the experiences of a fictional 17-year-old version of myself during the COVID-19 pandemic in 2021. I would ideally like feedback on whether the story is solid and what can be improved upon. There is no real hard deadline. As far as budget goes, at most I will go up to 200 per session